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15% off mooncakes*

• Not valid for:
• 2-piece boxes
• All Teochew Flaky Orh Nee (Yam) Mooncake series
• Black Thorn Snowskin Durian series
• Limited Edition Mooncakes

Offer Valid till: October 06, 2025

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• Promotion is valid from 4 September to 6 October 2025 (both dates inclusive).
• Payment must be made with a Citi Credit Card or Citibank Debit Card to enjoy the promotion.
• Promotion is applicable for orders purchased onsite at Peony Jade restaurant, via email at pja@quaysidedining.com, or by calling +65 62769138.
• Promotion is not valid for 2-piece boxes, as well as all Teochew Flaky Orh Nee (Yam) Mooncake series, Black Thorn Snowskin Durian series, and Limited Edition Mooncakes.
• Not valid in conjunction with other discounts, promotions, vouchers, or membership privileges.
• Prices are subject to service charge and prevailing GST.
• Mooncakes are while stocks last.
• Citibank's and Peony Jade’s decision on all matters relating to the Promotion will be determined at its reasonable discretion and is final and binding on all participants.
• Citibank shall not be responsible for the quality, merchantability, or the fitness for any purpose or any other aspect of the products and/or services provided by third parties. Citibank shall not at any time be responsible or held liable for any loss, injury, damage, or harm suffered by or in connection with these products and/or services. All disputes about quality or performance of the product and/or services shall be resolved directly with Peony Jade.
• Citibank and Peony Jade reserve the right, at their reasonable discretion, to vary, add to, or delete the Promotion terms and/or terminate the Promotion.
• "Citibank" refers to Citibank Singapore Limited, and “Peony Jade” refers to THE QUAYSIDE GROUP PTE. LTD.

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