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• Valid till 6 October 2025 for:
  • Online purchases made via http://www.summerpavilion.oddle.me/
  • Walk-in purchases
• Not valid with bulk purchase privileges.
• Orders must be made at least one working day prior to collection, subject to availability.
• Baked mooncakes are available for:
  • Self-collection
  • Delivery till 6 October 2025
• Snowskin mooncakes are available for:
  • Self-collection
  • Delivery from 4 September 2025 till 6 October 2025
• Not valid with other offers, discounts, privileges, promotions, sets, or vouchers.
• The hotel reserves the right to amend the privileges or terms and conditions without prior notice.
• UOB Cards Privileges General Terms and Conditions apply.

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